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Touch me where we're not supposed to,  
Just to let me know you care.  
Hold me close and kiss me hard,  
Just so I know you're really there.  

Take off my cloths and I'll take yours,  
We'll let this happen as it should.  
Make love as has never been made,  
Or at least the best we could.  

I feel dirty and amazingly cheap,  
So overrated and used.  
I guess it could have been better,  
But at least I'm still amused.  

I'm a whore not worth a dime,  
Kill me now to clean the streets.  
Spray me down and hang me to dry,  
Just leave me with the sheets.  

You should hold me now the most,  
When I really need a hand.  
But instead of being close to me,  
You're with another man.  

You look dirty and oh so cheap,  
So damn easy and wrong.  
Now I truly realize,  
Why it didn't last all that long.  

You're the whore not worth a pence,  
I'll forget you to forgive my sins.  
You couldn't even hold me close,  
When I wept for you within.  

Who needs who to hold them near,  
The romantic or the whore?  
Simply stupid of the man,  
And the slut that he adored.  

I'll never fall in love again,  
I'll never try to care.  
I'll blame it on that worthless whore,  
That was never really there.
©2005-2009 ~LifeIsMediocre
:iconlifeismediocre:

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Whore is about being used, and realizing you're not the dirty one, it's the woman that used you. (written from the perspective of a man)

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:iconao-the-absolute-one:
have you gone through a bad experience or something like that?

--
"Through me the way into the suffering city,
Through me the way to the eternal pain,
Through me the way that runs among the lost.
Before me nothing but eternal things were made,
And I endure eternally.
Abandon every hope, ye who enter here."
:iconlifeismediocre:
It was similar... I used a little artistic license to add to it...

I got used in a relationship, the girl wanted sex, sex, sex, I wanted love... She left me for someone else after she had her fill of me.

Guess some guys would be okay with a relationship based in bed... Some guys arn't though.

-Dan

--
"Everyone has their own form of herion."
-Kurt Cobain

"Just because it says 'she', doesn't mean it's about a girl."
-Unknown
:iconxdragonx588:
nice job, i really like this poem
:icon3pieces-of-chaos:
Oh, that's good writing; I know exactly how the story goes

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:devilish:
:iconyou-f0und-m3:
ouf! that's lush. i <3 the fact that it's from a guy's point of view... yeah.. i do.. i like it... sweet.

Peace!
oxo
:iconwitch500:
its very sad (but really good written)
i hope sometime you will find some who is worth your love
wish you the best

(please excuse my bad english im german)
:iconangelicximperfection:
as a girl who wants more in a relationship, it's nice to know that there are guys out there who aren't solely after sex. thank you. no one wants to be used. this was a very nice piece.

--
WHAT DO YOU MEAN MY BIRTH CERTIFICATE EXPIRED???
:iconpiratenblut:
its great <3

--
Do you live, do you die, do you bleed
For the fantasy
In your mind, through your eyes, do you see
It's the fantasy
:iconmacalano:
Amazing. I like the perspective. Definitely relatable.

--
Fear is the mother of morality.

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